Issue One Page One
ragles on Nov. 12, 2009
I said I wasn't going to colour them, but... I had to xD
Anyway. Is that text okay? And... is that last panel confusing at all? Gah I have so many questions!! CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM WELCOME!?!!
Yeah. I like the first and second panel. Although, the lighting is kind of retarded. LOL. I can't do orange lighting on people, sorry.
Aw, shit I forgot to do the fucking sign on the bus. >_> Pretend that that has the number 6 and a street name on it...