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A collaboration comic
that includes the
"actors" from THE
DEVON LEGACY
and these great comics
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| JustNoPoint | Another layout idea stole from mlai. I thought this was genius, splitting the page into columns.
I tried a new method for the energy beam. I will be practicing more with energy and explosions. The next few pages will give me plenty of practice to refine my skills.
I didn't get to watch any anime but I saw the newest 2 eps of House and Avatar =p
Finally, a good episode of House this season. The latest one was fantastic. And I'm sad we only have 3 more small episodes of Avatar left before the big 2-part ender =(
The image the grands showed Fenny from issue 3 is this scene
EDIT: Oy, it would be nice of me to show the page that inspired this layout everyone is saying I did well on.
Fight 2 I thought it was genius layout as well.
EDIT 2: I'm really liking the way the next page is turning out. But it has a LOT on it. I work on the weekends so I may not be able to update Monday. I may be able to wrap it up, if so that would simply make Tuesday's page late. I think the wait will be worth it. -Posted on May 16, 2008 |
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| User: DrProfessorman | | 5 | Oooooh! The bad guy's disappointed! Boo-hoo-hoo!
Why do bad guys whine so much when stuff doesn't go their way?
Douchebags. -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: Ickus | | 5 | -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: kyupol | | 5 | | these energy effects are getting better and better. -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: newgirlcomic | | 5 | | nice bottom page! very awesome looking! -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: JustNoPoint | | | Hero: Woot! Power Grand levels up
Power Grand learns glow worm glow
amanda: My mental intention for the hands like that is Fenny is a bit nervous to ask what exactly happened to Sally. Considering how bad off Sal was it was bound to be pretty intense.
Scorpious: It was either a beam or a regular panel boarder. And you've probably noticed I don't care much for 'regular' panel boarders =p
mlai: Well your 'accident' was very inspiring. I had to totally re script the battle scene after I read through your fight with Amok.
Dark Clown: Then you'll really like next issue :3
man in black: Always glad to have you reading! -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: Dark Clown | | 5 | | Flash Backs are cool. -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: mlai | | 5 | | Nifty 'simultaneous action' page. It may have been inspired by my page (which was actually just me using cut/paste/move to correct a drawing mistake...), but this layout choice makes more sense for your double narrative here. -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: Scorpious | | 5 | well the beam look perfect to me
it actually works well in this page -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: amanda | | 5 | | The energy beam is so deliciously shiny. Ha - if I were actually IN this battle, my last thoughts would be "Ooooh, pretty!" Fenny looks so (innocently)devious in the top left - it must be the hands. Also, regardless of its origin, the layout works extremely well here. -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: Hero | | 5 | | Power Grand definitely gets bad guy points there. -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: JustNoPoint | | | usedbooks: Thanks. Yeah, Fenny pretty much looked at the battle onscreen and lost the drive to rush in =D
patrickdevine: I can't take all the credit. As a Fight reader you've seen this type of layout before!
Tantz Aerine: Episode 15 The bus crash episode
Doctor Shadow: You should totally run over to Fight 2 and read/comment on all the pages to show your support for my cool layout ;-)
Greyman: I love you. That's pretty much what I wanted her to look like. It could have used an extra scene between showing her coming off the attack plan idea, but I couldn't fit anything extra with the story flow I was wanting.
Peipei: Yup, the duality really helped the scene though.
* me = durr how can I make both scenes have 3 panels?
albone: *Does my 'did a decent job' dance. This is the last 'epic' fight in the Prologue. I'm trying really hard to up the anti.
ttyler: Thanks. I hope to keep up the pace.
shaneronzio: If the layout for the next page works well it may rock more. Though the layout idea is experimental. I'm not sure exactly if it will work or not. I'll find out come Monday or if I delete the whole page after I get to a certain point :P -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: shaneronzio | | 5 | | this page RAWKZ! -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: ttyler | | 5 | | Another sweet page!! Lots of energy and movement. -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: albone | | 5 | | Another very cool page layout. I think it adds to the tension and drama of the story. -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: Peipei | | 5 | | That's awful what's happened ;; Good job with the large eye. It really emphasizes on the tragedy taking place here. Yea, simultaneous fights on the same page is indeed very difficult xD. -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: Greyman | | 5 | Hehehhee. Fenny looks totally: "damn, it's too late to help with that suicide mission. Oh, well. So, anyway..."
OooOoohhh... and Power Grand is totally awesome. Shiney lime-green chittin and all. -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: Tantz Aerine | | 5 | Which House episode was that?
And that is a great way to convey parallel scenes. Well done! It also gives the feel we see two pages. -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: patrickdevine | | 5 | | This is a really amazing layout! -Posted on May 16, 2008 | | User: usedbooks | | 5 | Simultaneous actions are hard to portray. I think you did a good job with the layout.
I like the way Fenny looks in the first panel. It's a very different expression (perhaps polar opposite) from the last page she was on (update before the battle scene I think). -Posted on May 16, 2008 |
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