The Book of Random (#6: A Hero)

The Book of Random

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The last of the new characters (regular ones at least) I hope.

-Posted on Jun 17, 2008

User: Jules 4

A few comments/suggestions:

1. Some parts of the page look a bit rough (like the grass in the last panel) and could use some editing.

2. Maybe adding facial expressions would enhance the quality of the comic (unless it's against your style which is ok then).

3. The earlier pages weren't half bad so keep it up.
-Posted on Jun 17, 2008

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