So, they begin their journey, and two of the characters meet each other earlier than expected. What will happen when they reach the city? Find out on Monday!
You need to make your panels bigger. They're even smaller than Kevin's and it's puny ennough already.
Also try to zoom in EVERY page, it allows you to add emotions which your comic unfortunately lacks.
Alsso,try to add things to your backgrounds, I don't care what you say, nowhere in the world is just a path. No offence or anything mind you. ;) Just try toadd trees in the background , like a forest. Possibly an old haunted one so that you wouldn't expect anyone to be there?
But, I must say,you've improved since you began so you do deserve some kudos! Good luck withn the comic and I hope you enjoy making it!
Super Rage at 5:30AM, May 5, 2008
nice
Arc at 3:13AM, May 5, 2008
You need to make your panels bigger. They're even smaller than Kevin's and it's puny ennough already. Also try to zoom in EVERY page, it allows you to add emotions which your comic unfortunately lacks. Alsso,try to add things to your backgrounds, I don't care what you say, nowhere in the world is just a path. No offence or anything mind you. ;) Just try toadd trees in the background , like a forest. Possibly an old haunted one so that you wouldn't expect anyone to be there? But, I must say,you've improved since you began so you do deserve some kudos! Good luck withn the comic and I hope you enjoy making it!