| | User: Arc | | | You need to make your panels bigger. They're even smaller than Kevin's and it's puny ennough already.
Also try to zoom in EVERY page, it allows you to add emotions which your comic unfortunately lacks.
Alsso,try to add things to your backgrounds, I don't care what you say, nowhere in the world is just a path. No offence or anything mind you. ;) Just try toadd trees in the background , like a forest. Possibly an old haunted one so that you wouldn't expect anyone to be there?
But, I must say,you've improved since you began so you do deserve some kudos! Good luck withn the comic and I hope you enjoy making it! -Posted on May 05, 2008 | | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here!
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