I was having second thoughts about including this gag (the jumping up and down) as it takes up a good chunk of a page and this story was already dragging on a bit but I just figured why not throw in at least a little bit of humour.
I'm currently drawing up a "cover" page to part 2 of chapter 2. I know I said I wasn't going to do them and I'm still having my doubts. They always seem to take longer than they should.
Locoma - Yep, it is the Bluenoser. And now we get to see the first meeting of Victoria and Bluenoser. I had a feeling that reactions to Victoria's backstory would vary but I figured why not just tell it and let the reader decide how they feel about it. So I'm looking forward to seeing what you think along the way.
shastab24 - He's not a nice guy. And it may get worse before it gets better (not that I actually see it getting any better).
Peipei and ghostrunner - Thanks!