User: Orin J Master		2
work on your composition. the text is far too small, the pages are filled with dead space for no reason, and there's a giant gap at the end from poor pacing. there's a lot of other problems, but the layout made it close to unreadable. -Posted on Oct 29, 2009

User: Anonymous		5
Who is this... Exlasses guy? -Posted on Nov 29, 2008

User: Ketiou		5
Hmm not bad. I love bn!!! So thats why I love it so much. Though try making the text a bit bigger jst so people can see it. Other then that nice. Oh I love the big battle field. And nice edits by the way. ^.^ You should check out my star force comic as I know you will love it! ^.^ -Posted on Jun 14, 2008