Terroquita I have changed the page because I wasn't happy with the tones. Also I did this page originally in a different program than I usually use (Manga Studio), but I wasn't to happy with it and thus this page is redone in ComicWorks. -Posted on Oct 16, 2007
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User: Terroquita
Thank you TheMidge28, I was not satisfied with how the comic was going earlier. I wanted it to have humor, but not to be too cartoony. I feel like I am on the right track now. -Posted on Oct 17, 2007

User: TheMidge28		5
wow! the art is phenominal...really love the gritty ink rendering! I read through the archive and very impressed with your art...but the story and dialogue seems some work...I did see the huge change with this page as opposed to the last pages which are much older,,,and it is a good chenge...less comical, the dialogue seems more thought out...well done. With heroine you want her to be taken seriously so going this route you have with this page works very well....looking forward to how this develops! -Posted on Oct 16, 2007

User: Terroquita
I'll tell you Poki_rat that there will be more butt kicking to come in the next couple of pages. And thanx ;) -Posted on Oct 16, 2007

User: Poki_rat		5
Ah Sweet! She is kicking so much butt right now! XD Welcome back, btw. -Posted on Oct 16, 2007

User: Terroquita
Wow, thank you artdude2002 - and you remember me even though my last update was - like a year ago ;) I'm honored. -Posted on Oct 16, 2007

User: artdude2002		5
Hooray! You're back! I really like the new look. But heck. I liked the old look, too. -Posted on Oct 16, 2007