| | aLeX O | ITS A DRAFT. so dont rate based off the art, I'm just asking for your opinions on the story...
for the panel where they have the big conversation, go in order of the little numbers on the edges of the
chat bubbles
by the way, noone is based off of anyone -Posted on May 22, 2006 | | User: Dementia Praecox | | 5 | | I like the start. The only problem I can find is what Stain pointed out- the text. Other than that, I'm quite intrigued thus far. Well done. -Posted on Jun 26, 2006 | | User: Stain | | 4 | | It could use some work. The text needs to fit better with the page. It needs a little more explanation on what's going on, though. Overall it looks like it could get good. 4/5 -Posted on May 26, 2006 | | User: aLeX O | | | 2 things. first, chainsaw, I'd win. I'd just bring my Katana in and slice you to pieces
second: COMMENT PLEASE! IF YOU SEE MY COMIC, COMMENT FOR CHRIST SAKES! -Posted on May 25, 2006 | | User: chainsawhammer | | | | Come on, Alex, I dare you to fight me! If you can even figure out who I am... -Posted on May 25, 2006 | | User: aLeX O | | | | I finished Pencilling # 2, should be ready soon -Posted on May 25, 2006 | | User: aLeX O | | | | finished pencilling # 2, guest starring a certain other character -Posted on May 25, 2006 | | User: alexO2 | | | | I dont care, chainsaw. go f*** yourself, and stay away from my friends. if you want a fight you got one. -Posted on May 25, 2006 | | User: chainsawhammer | | | | You suck! This comic sucks! The story is stupid, and youre just a loser! NERD! -Posted on May 24, 2006 | | User: densad | | 5 | | gutentag -Posted on May 24, 2006 | | User: Anonymous | | |  Ok, it would be SO much easier to read if you put the speech bubbles in the right order. I'm not flaming. As is, it took me three tries before I got it all right. -Posted on May 24, 2006 | | User: aLeX O | | | | honestly guys, hit me with all you got, its the only way I can improve. I wont get mad at you unless you point is stupid. -Posted on May 23, 2006 | | User: aLeX O | | | | F1R$T p0$t! \/\/00t -Posted on May 23, 2006 | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here!
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