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Page 4 Character Profile : Orrin Beaumont
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| arcade81 | Art: This picture has been stuck in my head since i sketched it. My mental colouring wasnt a patch on this version. Needless to say Im pleased.
Story: The Next page will be a similliar full page to introduce the female protagonist.
Thanks for reading -Posted on Oct 02, 2007 |
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| User: salasvexx | | | | Opps, simplicity, im an idiot.... -Posted on Oct 11, 2007 | | User: salasvexx | | 5 | ART- I like the simlicity you put on your characters, and your layouts, good stuff. curious, Do you have a story written out or do you play it by ear?
Story- Arcade, you have some potential here. On one selfish hand I want you to hurry and get to the climax (or as you put it) "meat" of the story
But on the other hand, I want you to wait and build up the characters and plot, thus making the wait agonizing yet more satisfing at the end.
Either way, I'll be reading- 5 -Posted on Oct 11, 2007 | | User: kyupol | | 5 | nice coloring and poses. Though I think faces need a minor adjustment.
Thanks for droppin by my comic though. -Posted on Oct 03, 2007 | | User: ShinGen | | 5 | | As said before, great coloring. Is that a chocobo? Anyways nicely done. -Posted on Oct 03, 2007 | | User: x2_gon | | 5 | | Great coloring! -Posted on Oct 03, 2007 | | User: Shao | | 5 | | forgot to rate, nyah x3 -Posted on Oct 02, 2007 | | User: Shao | | | I love the coloring. You did a good job making the lit and darkened area's balanced.
you're really good. =3 -Posted on Oct 02, 2007 |
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