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| DemonicChocobo | Every page there's something I hate. For this page it's the way Vel(Kale's dad) looks in the last panel. Ugggh.
Also, in case you guys haven't noticed, I'm REALLY lazy when it comes to backgrounds. REALLY lazy. Might be because I'm not very good at drawing them...which is probably because I'm always too lazy to draw them...Hmm. -Posted on Nov 18, 2007 |
| | User: rmmanuel | | 5 | | Oooo, I like it!! -Posted on Jan 30, 2008 | | User: KoE | | 4 | You did a pretty good job of making Kale's dad look old. And yeah, the background is... passable at best.
Last-panel Vel also seems to have the most problem coming from his right arm just... Hanging there. The white text is also a little hard to read, but meh.
Moral of the story is work on it moar. -Posted on Nov 18, 2007 |
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