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| User: Yroc | | | | good stuff. -Posted on Sep 19, 2006 | | User: Nintendude | | 5 | | Thumbs up! -Posted on Sep 16, 2006 | | User: josif | | 5 | | good but the people stand perfectly still the whole time use poses and emotions. -Posted on Sep 16, 2006 | | User: KevinClifford | | | | Yay! >>; Will you be bring of AiH also? -Posted on Sep 16, 2006 | | User: mishi_hime | | | not so bad. hmm...
just don't mention yourself throught the story, and were good.
(I also hope your plot isn't totaly random and stupid.lol.)
I agree with superpee tho.
You need more action an movement. the visuals are as important as the text. (make stuff happen Lol) -Posted on Sep 16, 2006 | | User: billybob800 | | | | I'll try that out. -Posted on Sep 16, 2006 | | User: Superpee | | 3 | | When looking at the comics you've posted on Smackjeeves, I suggest this: give them face expressions that matches their emotions. Make a character look sad, when he's sad. Or happy, when he's happy. -Posted on Sep 16, 2006 | | User: jef dam5 | | | | Found it. The .com wouldnt display. -Posted on Sep 16, 2006 | | User: jef dam5 | | | | Good too know that. But the URL doesn't work. -Posted on Sep 16, 2006 | | User: billybob800 | | | | I'd like to say that the author joke will no longer be used after the second strip. If you wanna read them now, go to SMWC's Smack Jeeves Address at http://supermarioworld.smackjeeves.com/ -Posted on Sep 16, 2006 | | User: jef dam5 | | 3 | | Aside from the overused joke that includes 4th wall breaking, it's not bad. At least not eyeraping and actual good white panneling wich you rarely see. -Posted on Sep 16, 2006 | | User: billybob800 | | | | My First fav, too. Sweet. -Posted on Sep 16, 2006 | | User: billybob800 | | | | Wow, I have my first comments already. Thanks, guys. -Posted on Sep 16, 2006 |
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