Super Awesome Anime Sprite Comic (SAASC #2)

Super Awesome Anime Sprite Comic

ron1334

Alright laser vision, now we are definatly dead...

Behind the Frames: The Flying Monkeys were made very crappilly by me. Also note that most details dont go missed observe im in the first frame in the exact place in the second frame so that theres comletley no way that i could get up there that fast lol (just a joke). now also I get my sprites from http://www.spriters-resource.com/ credits for the rips to all i ripped from. Now all the jibberish at the bottom say something i dont recomend you look because its a spoiler for tomorrows comic. Keep reading!

-Posted on Apr 04, 2008

User: TBustah

Seriously, is this intentionally horrible?

I see other people have been giving you advice, and it's mostly been helpful. Take it and run with it, it's a start

But I would seriously recommend that you halt production of this until you refine your skills. Take some time off to observe some good sprite comics, and adapt their techniques into your own pages.
-Posted on Oct 30, 2008

User: ron1334

kk ill make sure i do that
-Posted on Apr 05, 2008

User: Walrus 4

1. Put the panels in an order so they fill up the blank spot under the title.
2. Get rid of the last panel and put to be continued on the panel before it.
3. Make the textbox outline less thick.
-Posted on Apr 04, 2008

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