Stray Cat (Page 6)

Stray Cat

Kane wo Narashite

Sorry about how long it took, I'm visiting my family and friends back home! XD I'm so happy that I've come this far already, and I can't wait to get the next few pages up, because this is where the story really begins~

Thanks for all your support, it means a lot to me!

-Posted on Jun 19, 2009

User: gumonshoes 5

^^
-Posted on Jun 21, 2009

User: Mutation 5

Friends and Family over comic definitely. n.n
The page and dialogue is quite good this page, but the word bubbles are not your best. O_o
Try reading them out loud when you put them down, detecting where pauses in speech would make sense (Also I recommend typing the words, then finalizing the bubble!)
I also recommend '...'s in batches of three only.

Sorry if I tend to say to much stuff... n.n;
-Posted on Jun 19, 2009

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