| | Zeke5 | | Zeke: We'll be talkin' like this for a while. -Posted on Jan 20, 2006 |
| User: Zippo Prower | | | | Yeeek, the bitmixing, normally I don't hold this against comics but, it just doesn't work here!!! -Posted on Sep 28, 2007 | | User: riotgunner | | 3 | | its easy to find sprites that all the same style try mystical forest zone act 4 -Posted on Oct 28, 2006 | | User: The mediocre one | | 5 | | this is a joke, right? please tell me this is a joke. -Posted on Oct 28, 2006 | | User: Chao Friend | | 5 | | Yo bub I can't read the yellow font so change it. Please. A lot more people will like it if you use a different color. -Posted on Apr 29, 2006 | | User: the2pacfan47 | | 3 | Ok... theres at least a dozen things that need fixing on this. The pannels are wwaayy to large for this type of thing. The flow of the comic is very scratchy. some of the text is hard to read (the yellow mostly), your tryin to pull effects that wont work in MS Paint, and its all over the place and random (hard to follow).
But the accual sprites and balance are good. You have potential here, you just gotta better the comic and use it. Im not saying its bad, it just needs some major work to improve it. Hope u dont find that offensive... -Posted on Mar 25, 2006 | | User: Zeke5 | | | | all i found -Posted on Jan 21, 2006 | | User: Zeke5 | | | | Zeke:i have -Posted on Jan 21, 2006 | | User: Jordantosh | | 1 | | Might want to get Photoshop... -Posted on Jan 21, 2006 | | User: KevinClifford | | | | You like mixed bits ... that's like bad ... -Posted on Jan 21, 2006 | | User: Zeke5 | | | | read sonic revolution it's funny -Posted on Jan 21, 2006 | | User: Zeke5 | | | | Zeke: I'll do my best. -Posted on Jan 21, 2006 | | User: elenawing | | | | one suggestion. Possibly choose less bright colours for the green and yellow text? possibly very dark green and dark orange could be used instead? because i can't actually read the yellow text :) -Posted on Jan 21, 2006 | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here! | |
