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| Elitist Raven | This is my first sprite comic! If you see any mistakes let me know.
This is a cameo of SA2, so if you haven't played it, you aren't going to get most of the jokes.
Credit to everyone who ripped the sprites I used in this, I found them at http://sprites.fireball20xl.com -Posted on Mar 19, 2006 |
| | User: CJ01 | | 5 | | lol I wonder if that could happen in the actual game lol -Posted on May 23, 2006 | | User: Xergrim | | | | Looked good, but since you haven't updated at all, this is off my favorites list. I hope you can update this summer or something, and if you do, then tell me and I'll check out the new stuff. -Posted on Apr 18, 2006 | | User: Director | | 5 | | Yay sonis's an idiot. -Posted on Mar 31, 2006 | | User: Smaza2 | | 5 | | Why havent you updated, PK? -Posted on Mar 25, 2006 | | User: Twin | | 4 | That always was odd...even Sonic couldn't drop from 30,000 feet on a board onto concrete AND SURVIVE.
Chuck Norris maybe, but not Sonic. -Posted on Mar 25, 2006 | | User: Darkside | | 4 | What most other people who already told you the problems said.
Oh and in panel 2. You forgot to take out that greenspot between sonics quills -Posted on Mar 22, 2006 | | User: Vaati | | | | I don't think that was worth a 3. -Posted on Mar 22, 2006 | | User: lefarce | | 3 | Him hanging on the side of the ship in pannel's 5 and 6 should really be redone. Your increasing the size of one sprite that is probably a smaller pixel size then sonic!
This just makes it hard to tell whats going on. Look at the outline blocks for the helicopter, they're half the size of sonic's head. It seems so out of place when you are using such detailed sprites for backgrounds in the rest of the issue.
Other then that, really good. Punch line was good, and the rest of the comic looks just perfect.
Those two pannels kinda' bug me though.
A 3 is you! -Posted on Mar 22, 2006 | | User: the2pacfan47 | | 5 | | Lol! Thats the way it prob would happen for Sonic... and than hed splat to his death... which would suck but wed still laugh a little... and I dont know where Im going w/ this so Im gunna just shut up lol -Posted on Mar 21, 2006 | | User: deadfunny1 | | 4 | | I dont really see any mistakes. pretty nice! -Posted on Mar 21, 2006 | | User: LordCommunistFox | | | | Nah you don't have to redo it. However if you need a "City escape" like background gp here:http://sprites.fireball20xl.com/SSA/Sheets/cityesc2.gif -Posted on Mar 21, 2006 | | User: HypnotikNinja2 | | 5 | | Nice! Like Kagomas said add talking motions and it will make it look so much better! (Not that it isn't good already) -Posted on Mar 21, 2006 | | User: Kagomas | | 5 | I can't find any mistakes in this comic!
Good positioning, decent sprites and a nice punchline!
The only thing I would say is to try and add some talking motions to the characters face (It makes any comic look professional!) -Posted on Mar 21, 2006 | | User: Mega Greg | | 5 | | Very nice! -Posted on Mar 20, 2006 | | User: Elitist Raven | | | Oops, forgot it was a Helicopter -.-;
If you can help me find a more aircraft-ish background, I'll redo this!
Thanks for reading and voting! -Posted on Mar 20, 2006 | | User: LordCommunistFox | | 4 | | The aircraft Sonic was in was a heli, not a jet. The background does not look like a plain. It is a tunnel from a Batman game for the SNES. You get a 4 for not being realistic! But over all this is a good sprite comic. However you really OD'ed on the commas (,)! -Posted on Mar 20, 2006 |
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