001 - Chapter One : The Deceiver
Rayqui on June 29, 2010
C'mon. You just looked at the top of this page and thought "OMG, what happenned to Rayqui's skills, this page sucks". And then you saw... me. Or should I say, Commissar Rayqui, back in his good ol'gear. And then you faved this comic.
If you did not, do it now. This comic shall have updates. A plot. Plot twists. Plot holes. And... stuff.
See ya tomorrow, for another page of pure awesomeness.
~Rayqui's back.
picosux224 at 1:08PM, Jan. 28, 2011
lol a shyguy broked the 4th wall faved
Kaolyne at 6:00AM, Aug. 23, 2010
Move over, Napoleon. Rayqui is back!
Larry at 10:37PM, June 30, 2010
@The_Cuz It's a small review I wrote in maybe 5 minutes or less for a comic that I stumbled across. My review isn't negative and is indicative that I'm going to return to read more of the comic. You can't call yourself an artist if you would shut your ears (aka mute) to reviews by a potential reader. And could you at least spell my name right?
The_Cuz at 10:01PM, June 30, 2010
Oh and because I forgot welcome back Rayqui.
The_Cuz at 9:59PM, June 30, 2010
Larty: yoh Larry just saying that if you did that in one of my comics (which I really should update...) I would mute you, jeese man you don't have too write an entire review man.
Limzee at 9:04PM, June 30, 2010
DUN DUN! o-o
Erdnaxel at 8:53PM, June 30, 2010
...Holy shit...he's back...
Larry at 6:48PM, June 30, 2010
Hello Drunk Duck, Larry here with a review of Raqui's newest endeavor [i]Silver Rusty Peas[/i]. Panel one opens to an intentionally bad comic. It's a near-cliche gimmick, and I'm worried about how it will be used in the rest of the comic, but should it be used sparingly then it's not too big a detractor from the overall comic. That said, the image quality of the "crappy comic" seems to high, and needed a more low-grade .jpg feel to it. The panels after the first portion reveal the underpinnings of the first part and will probably set up the story in the next few pages. However I have a few problems with them. The second to last panel is cluttered. Even with the word balloon tails it's difficult to tell who is talking in which bubble. The last panel is visually better, and my concerns with it are more story based. Author inserts have always bothered me in any non-journal comic context. I just did a big parody of self insert drama/adventure comics on sucks. Self-insert fantasies often mean that the main character is a big player in the story, and pretty much can't go wrong... or commit any serious offense without any repercussion. They don't serve the plot, with instead the plot bending and warping to make sure the self insert stays some continually witty always-right god. Unlike sitcoms, the character based on the creator in webcomics comes off as more an exercise in narcissism than anything enjoyable. Having said all of that, I'm giving this a 3 simply because it's the first comic and the rest could prove me wrong. I have the feeling that the entire thing might be more of a meta-parody and we just haven't seen enough of that to justify it.
XM0stLyGhOstLyX at 10:38AM, June 30, 2010
LOLOLOL ITZ SNAKE HE RZ B TEH 1337sN1p3r
ZesuXII at 10:06AM, June 30, 2010
OMG ITZ SORA HE IS AWSUM I M GOIN 2 FAV TIS ONE
SuperNovaX at 10:05AM, June 30, 2010
i iz snx and i iz gonna be the best spriter evah Epic win.
xVegitox at 7:16AM, June 30, 2010
lol at the first 6 panels
Nerd Fury at 6:31AM, June 30, 2010
I actually knew from the beginning that it obviously was going to go somewhere rather than just be a perfect example of a horrible sprite comic. And who says I'm going to fave it? You're not the boss of me! ...I mean, I am, but not because you told me to >_>