| | Pentop3 | | HA!!! How ya like me now?! -Posted on Aug 15, 2007 | | User: ShinGen | | 5 | | Looks cool. Funny for sure. -Posted on Oct 06, 2007 | | User: SmartSpriter | | | 'I only have paint' is a good excuse for 1 thing and 1 thing only.
"The effects need work"
Other than that, every other error I pointed out can be fully avoided with just Paint. You can't use Paint as your excuse, as great comics can be made in Paint.
And you just made 6 spelling errors in that sentance alone, not to mention the grammatical errors. You need to slow down, check over what you type, and work on that. I'm seriously trying to help you, so please try not to get frustrated. Criticism is what helps you get better, but you need to help yourself, too. -Posted on Aug 16, 2007 | | User: Pentop3 | | | | Look I onley have paint I dont have some supercool spriting prograim so I make mistackes and i probibly speled this and misthakes. -Posted on Aug 16, 2007 | | User: SmartSpriter | | | -You're mixing bittages/styles too much.
-In panel 3, NiGHTs's text bubble should be to the right of what'shisface, so that they are in the correct order.
-The effects need work.
-I think I said this to you already, "WTF" is not a word. Please use real words in dialouge, and use correct grammer and spelling.
-panels 4-6 don't need to be that big. There's big empty spaces in them, so you could've made the panels a lot smaller.
-You never seem to want to zoom in.
-'chaos blast' is way too dark to see, and it should be capitialized.
-panels 10-12 were confusing to understand at first
-your text bubbles need borders/stroke. -Posted on Aug 16, 2007 | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here!
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