Chapter 1 Page 2: Cia Chapter 1 Page 1: Cliff Cover

MysteriousJeff I hate Panel 3 The characters are out of proportion. Cia's too big for the stairway and Leon's pose is un-natural. Hopefully because I didn't actually use the last few months building a buffer, I might as well see the silver lining in trying to avoid mistakes like that in drawing future pages. Becuase of Cia's name, I decided that from here on out, applying to all my comics (excluding EXA), there will be character name pronounciation guides in the Author's comments in said character's page of introduction. Pronunciation: Sai-uh, not See-a or See-ya -Posted on Nov 09, 2009

User: Limzee 5 I LIKE panel three! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA, disagreements of DOOM! -Posted on Nov 09, 2009 User: DiamondPirateAlex 5 Looking great! *Waits for plot* -Posted on Nov 09, 2009

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