Prologue: I'll show you a New world. Title page
Arios on Sept. 8, 2009
Yay, beginning the main story. After some time doing Tim and Persephane, I decided to put it on hold until I get the main story up, and it will return as brief after chapter episodes in this comic. The background is the oilified image of the sky in on the way back from Florida, I saw it and thought, "Oooo! Purdy!" *click*. Goes perfect for when I need a peaceful looking sky.
therealsquee at 7:54PM, April 29, 2010
I do not like the mixing of art styles, especially because your art style being so cartoony. The girl's torso is thick considering the build of her limbs. Also, a female's body is generally supposed to be the size of her head stacked atop itself 5 and a half times, this one looks more like 8. The anatomy of the wings is all wrong, look at some birds to get a better idea of how a wing is supposed to be shaped and what the feathers should look like. Also, the wings are not really sitting propperly, nor are they placed properly. The image itself looks very two dimensional, shading would probably help that alot.
harkovast at 10:44AM, Sept. 25, 2009
That woman looks to have four wings. I dont know why that seems stranger then two wings, as most women don't have any wings at all, but there ya go!
harkovast at 10:44AM, Sept. 25, 2009
That woman looks to have four wings. I dont know why that seems stranger then two wings, as most women don't have any wings at all, but there ya go!