Page 29, Chapter Two Starts!
Aghammer on June 1, 2009
Chapter two begins! You might recognize the man. The girl was also in one panel of chapter one :) A little verbage to set the stage for the rest of the story.
I liked the pencil work for this one but didn't care for the ink or the color... oh well. Here it is anyway :) The next page will be more in line with the black and white "style" of chapter one.
Let me know what you think.
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Comments from the end of chapter one (page 28) :)
Avie, Thank! Kayla did a tremendous job of working my script :D She is awesome. When I win the lottery, I'm hiring her fulltime ;)
Satoshi, thanks (for Kaylove ;))
Kay, Thanks again... your work is so good... it makes my story look good (no easy task ;))
plymayer, WTHecksicle thanks!
PeiPei, Yeah she did... and it pops up again in chatper 2.. thanks :D
Amanda, Me too :D Thanks... hopefully you will enjoy.
Niccea, Pendent of DOOOM... that needs to be the official name..ha.
TheSkunkTrainer, The dream allowed me to introduce some of the weird elements of the story. Thanks for all your comments :D
JustNoPoint. Thanks man and thanks for the pointers and comments. You'll see more banter soon. :)
Mattchee, Thanks for the comments man. Yeah, scary but not as scary as your work... yikes!
Mushroom, Thanks bro. Wish it was mine. And the links were totally NOT a way to get more page views :)
Worstcase, Thanks. I really enjoying BOTH your comics... so good!
Kaiyaweird, The ominous-ness is just starting..haha. Thanks.
Jabali, Thanks my friend and I'm looking for updates, but no pressure :)
dotdotdot, Thanks... and here we go!
Pato, Thanks man!
Little Swan, Me too! So awesome and so much better than my work on it ;) Good.. I hope you enjoy :)
Tommym, My friend, you have an avatar! Awesome pic! You are so good... I really appreciate your attention to my comic... I'm honored! I love your take on the pages... especially the bus :) Hopefully you will enjoy this chapter as well. The weird stuff moves from the dream realm to the "Real world". Don't discount Kat... I still think she's stronger than Lucien!
CatCatDragoo, Thanks! and such a cute avatar!!
JustNoPoint at 12:19PM, June 5, 2009
As long as she doesn't wake up again from dreaming this I'll say I really like the scene lol Oh and how did that color get in there? Nice job on the city scape in the BG
tommym at 6:38PM, June 4, 2009
Dear Aghammer, Thanks for your comment about my avatar. Little Swan,writer of "Seven Damnations" helped me. Thanks for your offer of help also. Congrads on starting Chap.2 Don't tell me that's Lucian! He's so evil!I hope the three humans holding the balance of power are SaiSai,Kat and friend.Very nice page. Tommym
Niccea at 4:33PM, June 3, 2009
Beware the colored girl in the black and white comic. (If I didn't add "in the black and white comic" that would sound pretty racist, neh?)
dotdotdot at 3:20PM, June 3, 2009
That's wicked! Love the touch of colour! Great page! Cheers!
TokyoRose at 7:46PM, June 2, 2009
Lovely layout...and I just LOVE the little splash of colour you added...it makes the whole thing just pop! Don't be so hard on yourself. There is just a touch of something evil in their words...can't wait for the next page. :D
CZweig at 1:03PM, June 2, 2009
I absolutely love this page :D Even if it's just a splash page it's incredible. The splash of colour really adds a lot to it! :D
worstcase at 12:18PM, June 2, 2009
She is so happy looking...yet...I SENSE EVIL :) Fantastic job
Mushroomcomix at 11:38AM, June 2, 2009
The inking and the color are BEAUTIFUL Aghammer, you're to critical :D My favorite comics in the world only have color when necessary and that's what I like about this page the most! Can't wait for the rest of the chapter!
amanda at 11:25AM, June 2, 2009
I like how brightly colored she is - a nice contrast ^.^ *clap clap* Looking forward to the ride, lovely!
Jonko at 11:24AM, June 2, 2009
I like the inking and the color! The red on the little girl really stands out and looks great. Also love the background in this one!
Theskunktrainer at 8:51AM, June 2, 2009
oohoo! i know who that is. i like how this page looks.
Aghammer at 8:32AM, June 2, 2009
Couple of quick additional thoughts. 1) Lucien is NOT wearing armor.. it's supposed to be wearing a biker jacket (cause he's cool like that). 2) I totally forgot their shadows.. might add that and update, if I get the time. Thanks everyone!!
mattchee at 8:11AM, June 2, 2009
VERY cool chapter set up. I'm glad this page got colored, I think it help sets the mood for things to come!
Peipei at 3:34AM, June 2, 2009
Uh oh o.o. These two are planning too peacefully xD. That's always a tragic sign x.x. Also, I love the way you opened this :3. I wonder where this is all gonna go with these two...
Little Swan at 1:18AM, June 2, 2009
The plot thinkens :D And I do enjoy. Hey though, your art style is awesome too, makes me jealous :)
TheFlyingGreenMonkey at 10:26PM, June 1, 2009
Simply amazing AG! Now we have some idea whats going on and I like it! XD.
Avie at 10:17PM, June 1, 2009
I love how you sketched them, I always have trouble sketching my characters from behind. *is jealous once more*
kaiyaweird at 10:16PM, June 1, 2009
ooo, yes it is! Go omnimousness! Very cool plot development. I'm guessing these three humans are Saisai, Kat,and their friend...
Warpedwenger at 10:16PM, June 1, 2009
The skyline in the background looks great.