whoa, at first I got surprised because I thought it would be another KH sprite comic (theres tons of 'em here in DD lol) this is looking cool in every page, keep it up!
God damn- my comment got
cut offf! As I was saying-
the art and story look awesome-
it makes me want to finish playing the game
o__x;;
Going to meh faves!
Since I've never been a fan on commenting on pages an author will never go back and visit, I'll just post this on your most recent entry.
In page one, your "girl" looks strongly like a guy. Strongly. No facial features point otherwise. Her body is a female's body, but to have a well-put-together character you need everything to point to what that character is.
Also, I'm critiquing your spelling, as an ion (eye-on) is an atom or a group of atoms that has acquired a net electric charge by gaining or losing one or more electrons, while an eon is more what you were going for (An indefinitely long period of time; an age.).
I cannot stress enough punctuation and grammar in comics. It is the most important thing you will ever face. We are reading these things, and I expect to read them correctly.
