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| User: Mimarin | | | "I sont usually make spelling mistakes"
Is the most Ironic thing I read today. -Posted on Sep 24, 2006 | | User: zork_the_hedgehog | | | | Dont worry the next one isnt going to be rushed -Posted on Sep 24, 2006 | | User: Rich | | | My advice is to NOT rush your comic. Take your time.
After all, would you rather wait for a nice juicy steak or be fed a shit-sandwich right away?
Comics work the SAME way. -Posted on Sep 23, 2006 | | User: zork_the_hedgehog | | | | I sont usually make spelling mistakes, and Ill change it in a minute ok, I was in a bit of a rush to get this finished, so I made some crappy text boxes. dont worry, the next one will be much better quality, I can promise you that -Posted on Sep 23, 2006 | | User: Rich | | 1 | | This is a comic. NOT a storybook. We don't want a bunch of panels with only text. And the panels that DO have stuff have unreadable colored font and text blocks that don't even have a tail leading to the talking character! -Posted on Sep 23, 2006 | | User: speedingbullet | | 3 | | for one, you need to check your spelling, for two you need to upgrade your text boxes, and for 3 you need a better font, but otherwise, your comic might not turnout to be that bad. -Posted on Sep 23, 2006 | | User: lefarce | | | | You lost me at "forums.themysticalforestzone.com"... -Posted on Sep 23, 2006 | | User: Mimarin | | 2 | Oh God, I feel you are going to be one of these "immune to advice" spriters, but here goes:
Firstly You spelled "Intense" wrong, on your first page, that ain't a good start.
secondly you have colour coded text AND textboxes, this is completley needless, if you are making your text boxes/bubbles right you don't need it. Also it incorrectly applies distinction and tone to the voice of the character, characters with red text sound perpetually angry, that ain't good. -Posted on Sep 23, 2006 |
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