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| Mark | Alright this be my first day at Drunk Duck (my hands now tingle with erotic-I mean electric pleasure as I type this. Anyways I'm Mark and this is my webcomic. I hope you people like it.
This was the first strip which was completed around December last year. As you can tell it's really old and crappy. Don't worry, it gets better. -Posted on Aug 29, 2006 |
| | User: Darwin | | 4 | Hey Mark, thought I would pop over and take a look at what you have.
I also looked at your most recent strip so I am going back through the rest.
You might want to consider making your pages (and thereby your cells) larger. You're first two "in the game" cells are rather small and it is hard to make out what action is being taken between characters. With that and the heavy inking the artwork gets rather jumbled.
I'll hold off on the scripting for a sec here considering I haven't read all of this...
An interesting place to start...Lets see where it goes, eh? -Posted on Sep 10, 2006 | | User: josif | | 4 | | didn't really know what was going on... -Posted on Aug 30, 2006 |
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