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| Hypa Deb | | my fisrt page it sucks...its about Kiji and me and some random guy(he comes in later...) -Posted on Aug 30, 2006 |
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| User: Darkmax | | 5 | -Posted on Oct 29, 2006 | | User: KonuraDog | | | I REALLY won't be able to read this till it's resized
~Kelsi~ -Posted on Sep 01, 2006 | | User: gaaras_b3b3 | | 5 | | *sniffle sniffle* i-im not in it but but why WHY I ASK U WHYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its not fair*goes off and cries in a little corner* WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -Posted on Aug 31, 2006 | | User: Kiji | | | | besides i only like CHEESE PIZZA!!!!!! ya no pizza should be sp. pitza but o well -Posted on Aug 31, 2006 | | User: Kiji | | 5 | | THATS NOT HOW IT HAPPENED!!!!!!!!! REMEMBER I ... *notices ppl r goin 2 read this* .... NEVERMIND!!!!!!!!! -Posted on Aug 31, 2006 | | User: theduckofanime | | 3 | It doesn't suck, it needs work, but it doesn't suck.
First thing would be to resize your comics. When you have to scroll to see half the page, somethin's not right.
Second, try and get rid of the blue lines if you can. They distract from your art.
Third, your character should look a bit more shocked. She looks kinda happy.
But the art isn't bad, and this can be a decent set up. Just keep trying. -Posted on Aug 30, 2006 | | User: theduckofanime | | | It doesn't suck, it needs work, but it doesn't suck.
First thing would be to resize your comics. When you have to scroll to see half the page, somethin's not right.
Second, try and get rid of the blue lines if you can. They distract from your art.
Third, your character should look a bit more shocked. She looks kinda happy.
But the art isn't bad, and this can be a decent set up. Just keep trying. -Posted on Aug 30, 2006 |
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