User: Poki_rat		5
This is a good start X) My first attempt had white backgrounds and poor conditioned sprites. It's the story that counts. -Posted on May 31, 2007

User: THKNN_NUL		5
Oh. It's mister criticism. Didn't you read the author comments? You'll get better with Time. I was HORRIBLE at making sprite comics at first. and that's putting it mildly. -Posted on May 24, 2007

User: soonmme		2
Here's list of "tips" .Save as png. .Don't color code text .Inverting=bad .Don't forget to fill out all the black(as you missed quite a bunch in some pannels) .Don't ever mess with the back ground the way you did. .Get paint.net for beter effects. You did one good thing, however. You tried to use some sighn of motion. -Posted on May 14, 2007