Bit 'wordy' this one, but we're still steaming ahead!
I'd appreciate some comments on the strip please. It's my first ever so I need constructive criticism.
Cheers!
looks like it's comming along realy cool man.i havent been able to read it all, but i followed the art and if you tweeked the anotomy a little bit it looks like something that could be in heavy metal mag. it's just a little stiff every now and then. like the character on the first page almost looks like he coulda been drawn from some kinda barbie doll, but it's not constant. you have some great shading and a lot of the people do look realy fuckin good,even youre scenary's realy good. i swear it's like somethin outa a kick ass 70's comic.
