This is the LAST PAGE.
I just want to thank everyone for all the support.
I'm not bent up over losing the contest, a lot of people entered, a lot of entries were way better than mine. It's good enough for me to be able to share this blood and tears with you all at least.
Many hearts.
Thanks for sticking through his little ride with me.
Really nice short story.
The art of this comic was at its strongest in the abstract settings and the high contrast panels, where the author's shortcomings are least noticeable.
Where it caused you to lose the contest was in the normal settings, with the humans, the house, the forest, etc. There, the deficiency in anatomical proportions, in perspectives, in depth of surroundings, etc etc, were visible.
theorah--
Actually I do think you're right about that. The dialogue was the thing I was horribly unsatisfied with throughout, but I hadn't thought about doing that page silently for some reason. I figured the least I could do was express an ignorance to death but I probably shouldn't need text to do that. ^^
Your advice and support is taken into account, and I thank you immensely.
Note to all: NO. I'm not continuing this one. Maybe some day waaay in the future I'll re-do it with improvement, but I'm not continuing this now. I have another--much better--project I'm working on for my website. I think you all might enjoy it.
Woooooow.... that was GREAT!!! Cho's got an evil smile! You know, that creepy wolf thing guy is kinda cute in a creepy kinda way. Anyway, NICE ENDING! Are you going to continue this comic? I'd really like it if you did. I'll understand if you want to move on to another project, but this one has a lot of potential. Seriously, great comic! Whether you choose to continue this one or not, I'm looking forward to your next comic!
Very interesting ending, that little smaile at the end is intreiging and questioning, like the smile at the end of Once Upon A Time In America XD
What can I say? I've already given my crit to pages, but over all I love the imaginative composition of panels, the story was interesting, intreiging, and best of all emotional and true---it didnt have a happy, all summed up ending, which is good IMO, it gives the readers something more to think about.
The comic was well paced, the story well chosen, you didnt try to fit alot into a little, make sure you do that if you enter again :)
The only negative crit I really have was some of the text could've been more poetic/complimented the images more....for example, the text on page 19 is good, it compliments the frustrated images and explains them. But on page 16, some of the speech states whats already there in the images, but doesnt really add to the atmosphere (Im refering to 'you hurt her, you made her bleed and stop moving' I think that panel wouldve been much better if the boy was just crying, with no text)
Anyway thats my only crit! ^_^ Good luck if you are to enter again! :)
