| | User: Kaizu | | | | Yeah... -Posted on Jul 31, 2008 | | User: charliemew2 | | 1 | | Not the best... -Posted on Jul 28, 2008 | | User: Otaku | | | | Brother did terrible here. -Posted on Mar 11, 2007 | | User: Brinstar Depths | | 2 | I recommend that you use speech bubbles, and not a little chat room at the top. The text is also difficult to read and looks messy in some spots.
This page is also rather short and that last panel is nothing more than a white space (That continues much farther than necessary). Speaking of the last panel, one of the sprites is cut off on the top.
Also, the grass looks hastily made and is a nasty bright green (Which is the default color in M.S. Paint, I assume? You should try using background sites like www.bghq.com.
Its also tough to figure out exactly what is going on. Willing to take what back?
However, thank you for saving this as PNG. If it weren't, I'd give a 1/5. -Posted on Feb 19, 2007 | | User: PicaandPiku | | 3 | What's this saved as?
Anything besides png, is bad. -Posted on Feb 17, 2007 | | User: KevinClifford | | | Why are the sprites blurry?
Use real textboxes, man. -Posted on Feb 17, 2007 | | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here!
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