friezoo

This is the second Page it was originally named Oak V.S Birch and it was going to be a 2 Page long fight but due to stupidity I could not do that so its just a deadly wraph in fighting that you just see (You will also notice the nerds glaring at each other) -Posted on Oct 11, 2007

---

User: nighthawk41
Another thing I'd like to add to what everyone else says: You should just draw 3 straight lines behind a person who's running. The way you put it looks awkward. -Posted on Feb 20, 2009

User: Lukas Kirkby
Ok, lots of things to sort here. Here are some pointers: 1. Save in PNG. 2. Outline the Speechbubbles. 3. Make the frame outlines perfect. I'll give you more when you do these 3 things. -Posted on Oct 12, 2007

User: friezoo
K Ill keep that in mind it was just that with the first 2 pages I was really frustrated with something so i could'nt focus coz at my houes tehre are 4 damn distractions -Posted on Oct 11, 2007

User: ManaBlitz
The speech bubbles need the thinnest line as a border as well as a tail pointing at whoever is saying it.Also, in the first panel, why does Bill run past the lab then in the second panel go into the lab? And before typing what the character is going to say, repeat it back to yourself to make sure it sounds right.Make sure to always save in .PNG -Posted on Oct 11, 2007