User: EvilPikachu79
Orin J Master: I could cut that down but then it would seem too rushed. It's better to have it like this than to have a rushed comic. And the only reason I'm not developing some of the characters enough is because of something I am making them minor characters later on. There are only a few that are more developed than others for certain reasons. But you did give options on how I could improve so I give you dibs for that. You didn't just come on and complain about something. CHUKLAE: Thanks for reading. :D -Posted on Nov 16, 2009

User: Orin J Master		3
i've always wondered why comics about pokemon drag on forever or just have terrible jokes. now i'm thinking it's that following the paper-thin plotline of the games makes it too short, and most people aren't very funny. you could probably cut this down a lot by getting rid of pointless panels and compressing a few of the more spare comics together. and put more work into developing the characters. -Posted on Nov 15, 2009

User: CHUKLAE		5
Yay, he found a Gliscor! -Posted on Nov 07, 2009