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| User: qijun | | 5 | uh...
@Dark Spark... Rendering and brushes?
@Dev you stole my line
@Cheese That's cool and all, but in English?
LOLOLIMACTINGLIKEIMTHEAUTHOR, -Posted on Sep 29, 2009 | | User: DarkSpark | | 5 | | anyone know how he makes these effects on PDN? -Posted on Sep 29, 2009 | | User: cheesen8or | | | | i don't really see the smaller lines, i see more transparent lines thou, i also think the lightning would look better if it was just smaller and sharper lines with a radial blur from the point of where the lightning comes from -Posted on Sep 28, 2009 | | User: Reidy | | | Don't worry charlie, Cheese is right.
Yeah I didn't like the way the effects came out on this page either, I agree with you on the gradient thing.
also the shock wave is layered with smaller lines, you probobly just can't tell.
anyway, thanks for your support everyone, i appreciate it. Fan support is about 70% of what keeps me inspired to continue making comics. -Posted on Sep 28, 2009 | | User: reddragon142 | | 5 | | i hope this comic keeps as good as it is now and if it gets better the only think i have to do is YAY! lol ^^ -Posted on Sep 28, 2009 | | User: charliemew2 | | 5 | | wow cheese. I neveer knew you were so critical. :) -Posted on Sep 28, 2009 | | User: Lexxorodius | | 5 | | Wow, told you youd be back. -Posted on Sep 28, 2009 | | User: cheesen8or | | 5 | | i recon your lightning effect should have multiple layers of varying sizes, some should be thinner and they should make things lighter instead of just throwing some pale yellow over it, in panel two i think the gradient should have been the colour of kabutops, so the water stands out a bit more, and the end happened a little bit too suddenly, kabutops should've been a bit more injured and you don't see red use THAT many attacks, there should have been more of a struggle, but i guess you missed out on the start of the fight. other than that, i like this page so i'll still rate you a 5 -Posted on Sep 28, 2009 | | User: Lordee Z | | 5 | | Sweetness. -Posted on Sep 28, 2009 |
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