| | HikariLi | | Well, here's my first page, I'm probably gunna re-create the cover. xD; -Posted on Jan 13, 2009 |
| User: HikariLi | | | | Thank you ^^; -Posted on Jan 14, 2009 | | User: DARKNES | | 5 | | This looks really good so far -Posted on Jan 14, 2009 | | User: HikariLi | | | | Uhm, Thanks.. xD;;; -Posted on Jan 13, 2009 | | User: xaxelx | | 5 | This pretty good for a beginner. Just to keep you movitaved, I'm fav'ing this, and I'll keep my eye on it.
Just some tips...
1. Keep the text bubble tails just a bit slimmer, and not on the edge of the bubble itself.
2. Use the text bubbles you used from panels 3 and after, those are the best recommended.
All I can really offer. But yea, overall, great. -Posted on Jan 13, 2009 | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here! | |
