HikariLi

Okay, I probably fail horribly, but I wanted to take a crack at making a comic, mainly because the comic's I've read ownall. Anyways, this is just the title, don't kill me. -Posted on Jan 11, 2009

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User: KevinClifford
I wasn't talking about you, I was talking about the other people on that thar role playing forum =x -Posted on Jan 13, 2009

User: HikariLi
-coughs- I'm new, so yah.. -shifts her eyes- Sorry if I'm not as good as you experienced people? -Posted on Jan 11, 2009

User: KevinClifford
That's because they all use incorrectly shaded recolors there, more than likely =[ -Posted on Jan 11, 2009

User: HikariLi
Rofl. Never had complaints on my Roleplay forums. xD. -Posted on Jan 11, 2009

User: soonmme
meeeeeee Said: Recolor'splices A splice is two or more sprites thrown together. ;D -Posted on Jan 11, 2009

User: HikariLi
Oh, and I'm still using Gimp. x3;; I've gotten down the color editing and stuff. Oh, and, apparently, you didn't notice, the Main, isn't just the May sprite. It's something else. Notice the bandana? o.o -Posted on Jan 11, 2009

User: HikariLi
There's a plot, that's fer sure. And yes, I know the resizing is terrible. I'm really new at this. I'd love help xD Thank you for being very nice. -Posted on Jan 11, 2009

User: smbz321		5
-Posted on Jan 11, 2009

User: soonmme
Zee resizing is terrible. only resize with stretch and skew in increments of 100(resize and skew in vista :V), this type of title page is very cliché, try something more original next time. Recolor'splices are generally bad as main characters, if you can, try to get some better sprites. The colors for the text and what's behind it are very bright. Not terribly bad for a first comic. -Posted on Jan 11, 2009

User: SquishyNinja		5
I don't wanna be mean, I just wanna help. The title page doesn't really stand out. Is there some kind of hook in the story, something that will attract readers? Or is it just the same as every Pokemon game? It's a good start for a beginner. -Posted on Jan 11, 2009