| | User: mypetmorkie | | 5 | | yo, what program do you use for sprite comics? -Posted on Oct 29, 2009 | | User: justover6 | | 5 | | lol Poor Matty -Posted on Oct 16, 2009 | | User: reddragon142 | | | | well matty right now i paused the naruto comic because if i followed the main idea the story would be ending and im trying to get some ideas to keep it going but maybe i will update it this weekend. -Posted on Oct 13, 2009 | | User: exxxtasy69 | | 5 | | Your gradients are cool!!! -Posted on Oct 13, 2009 | | User: MINIMATTY | | 5 | | Hey no prob mate love the page funny quite amusing keep it coming, i know its ramdon but are u still doing naruto am i lov ehtt comic :) -Posted on Oct 12, 2009 | | User: Brawllucas | | 5 | | DUDE! LOVIN THAT TEAM JUPITER GUY! XD -Posted on Oct 11, 2009 | | User: awesomeness | | | And the grammar?
Emotes?
Sorry if I seem persistent, but it's still only grammar and emotes
that are your main problem.
This could be a really popular comic if you did. -Posted on Oct 11, 2009 | | User: reddragon142 | | | | i use the noise gradients in the fighting panels. only tha background isnt a noise gradient -Posted on Oct 11, 2009 | | User: awesomeness | | 4 | Still grammar mistakes. And emotes.
Once you get those right, and use noise gradients instead of those silly ones, it'll be really good.
No matter what, you always have to put an emote on the sprite. It makes it boring to read, otherwise.
Grammar/Spelling is still important.
There are three grammar mistakes in panel one and one in the last panel. But apart from that, very good. -Posted on Oct 11, 2009 | | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here!
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