| | User: Lukas Kirkby | | | Tanman, are you actually reading the comic? Yeah it's goes slightly too fast sometimes, but it does make sence, and darkwaif follows the storyline.
Anyways, there were lots of bad things with this comic, but I will help you by telling you how to fix those bad things.
1. Use the thinnest line for your speechbubbles.
2. Use the straight line tool to make the tails.
3. Sometimes you miss out making a tail for a speechbubble. This is just a case of needed to check over your work.
4. With the pokeball and the pokemon thing, just colour all of the pokemon red. For now, just use one shade of red, and see how it looks.
that's enough for now, but I'll give you more pointers next comic. -Posted on Dec 07, 2007 | | User: Tanman2 | | 1 | This doent make any sence at all
every panel is something random thats not even part of the story-2
In the third panel you catching the Rayquaza is a very VERY bad effect for the pokeball...-1
Your leaving too much space in the in the bubbles with only a little bit of text-1
Never EVER!! use Diamond and pearl sprites... -Posted on Nov 24, 2007 | | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here!
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