POKECOMICMASTER i have changed nearly everything -Posted on Aug 16, 2006
the journey begins THE BEGINING PART 2 THE BEGINING PART 1

User: Shadow99		5
I think it is ok. -Posted on Nov 25, 2007

User: KevinClifford
Dude, no way in hell am I getting dragged into another Co-Author thing. Look at my username! I already assist every Poke comic that isn't dead. -Posted on Aug 18, 2006

User: POKECOMICMASTER
or i make a new comic and one of u asists me -Posted on Aug 17, 2006

User: POKECOMICMASTER
can one of u assist me so that it be a better comic -Posted on Aug 17, 2006

User: KevinClifford
First off .... Re-size. (Select something then do to Image - > Stretch/Screw AND ONLY USE NUMBERS THAT END IN "00" IE, 100, 200, 300.) 2.) Use REAL TEXTBOXES. 3.) You used the wrong sprite in the ... Uh ... Let me see... 8th(?) panel? 4.) ... That Background (After Little Root) isn't even the BG from Hoenn... Its the fucking Kanto one! 5.) He says "It looks like a pidgey" ... And... there's not even a Pidgey sprite in there... 6.) You shouldn't just use the WHOLE fucking BG, do what you did with the Kanto BG, take bits off... Re-size even... 7.) Who ever said don't use white is Retarded, as hell. Don't use Black, either. White's the color people usually use (I use Black since I can make it look good... Thanks to PhotoShop.) 8.) Make Panels... That could of been ... Like 3 comics man! You could of had 3 more updates this week! 9.) Add unimportant characters in the Background! ... If you'd re-size you wouldn't even have to worry about that... Cause... They wouldn't be within view... 10.) Don't steal other people's jokes, or other peoples... Uh... Stuff... (I have someone stealing my ENTIRE storyline...) 11.) You comic should go down, not sideways... Scrolling side ways sucks... 12.) Spell check. I suggest writing your comic in Word, then spell checking it, and then adding it into Paint. You Spelt PiDgey wrong on the Battle... thing... And... Capitalize. PoKeMoN name's are proper nouns too! I don't think I found this many errors in ONE comic PAGE alone before... My ... Fucking ... God! -Posted on Aug 16, 2006

User: POKECOMICMASTER
why doesent one of assist me then u can help me make this comic better -Posted on Aug 16, 2006

User: Rick Xeros
Please stop making this comic.... it is the epitimy of crap and everytime you make a new one a cat girl cry's in pain!! not to mention you riped off Recon Dye badly in the last comic! -Posted on Aug 16, 2006

User: jef dam5
Please. No black. White was better but black? I would think of resizing your comic, fit it into pannels and then create the comic. Plus you use the wrong brendan in the battle sprite -Posted on Aug 16, 2006