| marshie | | >_> -Posted on Jul 19, 2006 |
| User: Nintendude | | 5 | | good job.. -Posted on Jan 04, 2007 | | User: Not Logged In | | |  Vagabond, I made that sprite. Tell me about it, not him. Good comic.
-Protoman -Posted on Jul 21, 2006 | | User: Not Logged In | | | SketchMan3, from the DGC HAHAHA!!
Instead of using "left to right" format for showing which character talks first, you should use "top to bottom". most professional comics do it that way, and it makes everything more organized.
*Sigh* if you MUST have an author character, you should at least restrict it to fillers for when you can't think of anything else. the main comic shouldn't be about you. It should be about your characters. You should restrict using the author to, maybe, every 20th comic, or just don't use it at all. I personally like author jokes, but they get mundane after EVERYone starts using them, and overusing them.
Other than that, I think it's funny. Backgrounds needed,floors needed, better edits, whatever. But the joke was funny, if abit overused. -Posted on Jul 21, 2006 | | User: Vagabond | | 3 | Wow, talk about the pot calling the kettle black...
-You should most definitely follow the previous advice about backgrounds. Just seriously, trust me on that.
-If you're going to edit a sprite, more power to you. Hell, if you're clever enough to realize that Megagloves don't make good human hands, fantastic. But your author sprite needs a little editting. Just throwing on the Dr. Light hands and feet isn't gonna cut it. Try to make them blend in a little better.
-You removed Bass's nose when you editted the last sprite in the 4th panel. Don't make it harder on yourself; just use the closed-mouth sprite.
... Ok, actually, I really don't have anything else that I can add. This is pretty decent for a newbie comic. I'll probably have more advice to give you 30 comics down the road or so. -Posted on Jul 20, 2006 | | User: Collossus | | 1 | | Dude seriously nobody gives a damn about your stupid author your focusing your comic waaaaaay to much on your stupid premade author! -Posted on Jul 20, 2006 |
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