| | User: Mega Greg | | | You need A LOT of work on this dude. Your spelling needs a lot of work since there's a lot of words that are easy to spell and you misspelled them. I suggest that before you add the text to your comic, try to type it in Microsoft word for spelling errors.
I really like it how you make backgrounds, but they're really choppily done. If you're having trouble to find some backgrounds just search around BGHQ.com and probably try to avoid making your own.
Speech bubbles are high priority to this. At times I don't know who's saying what and it just gets confusing sometimes. Try to make some speech bubbles. They're also be easier to read other than being read on the background which can be unreadable.
You also need to resize the sprite properly other than resizing them with your mouse. Try to resize them by 200 or 300. Anything that ends with 00 for that matter.
With all that down and maybe a little more practice then this might as well be a decent, readable sprite comic. -Posted on Sep 08, 2009 | | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here!
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