User: hypermac		5
-Posted on Nov 03, 2009

User: polo		5
-Posted on Mar 09, 2009

User: melsr007
Thank for the comment moverfield. -Posted on Mar 07, 2009

User: moverfield		5
I just read through your story so far, it's good stuff! This book reminds me of the old school superhero team comics, but with an in your face new school approach. Your story and pages keep getting better and better. You can really see your growth as a story teller. Keep it up! -Posted on Mar 07, 2009

User: melsr007
Thank for the input oneGemini and you are right about the first panel and second. I was just lazy when I drew that and as for the bridge I could done better job on that. -Posted on Mar 07, 2009

User: oneGemini
Should read "TWO HOURS LATER." Plural "S" for multiple hours. That's a problem you consistently have with your writing. I don't understand why that first panel (and therefore second) has a little bend in the bottom left of it. I could tell that was a planet just fine (though I can't tell what planet, because neither this page nor the previous tells me if it's Earth or that alien one). Should've just been straight across, or if you insist on a "creative" border, just go skewed on the whole panel, and not just a corner. Looks droopy. The bridge is a bit simplistic and flat, as if everyone is sitting at a cardboard cut out and not at a three dimensional/real station. As always, though, nice star fields. The ship in the first panel is a bit flat and uninteresting -- a bit low budget looking considering it's a drawing and you can do anything you want there. However, it looks drawn well enough. And I'm happy to finally see one of your two "main" characters appearing for the first time, though I've seen so much of the woman in red, that I'd consider her a main character -- BTW -- what is her name? What is anyone's name? We've never been properly introduced to just about any character, and we're this far in, and we don't know names? That's like watching Star Wars Episode I through III and not learning anyone's name until halfway through part II. -Posted on Mar 06, 2009

User: cyberdog		5
THIS IS THE BEST PAGE I'VE SEEN YOU DO. FANTASTIC -Posted on Mar 05, 2009