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| thefightingstranger | And this is the last page of the prelude. I probably could have extended it another page or two, but I had also planned to put it in a future arc.
Next week begins the main story. City in peril, greedy superheroes and Lucky with two girls by his side. -Posted on May 15, 2008 |
| | User: thefightingstranger | | | Just to answer the few questions without giving too much away:
Lucky and Larry have two very different personalities, although have the same goal of helping people. Larry likes to plan things out, even though it rarely works the way he wants. Lucky just goes into battle head first and usually succeeds. Heh, in a way they're my version of Charlie Brown and Snoopy. A likable loser and his scene stealing dog.
And the merc, Cutter, won't be turning into a werewolf, but will return very soon. Larry and Lucky aren't playing by standard werewolf/host rules. A piece of the puzzle to that mystery will be revealed in the first story arc. -Posted on May 15, 2008 | | User: legacyhero | | 5 | So will the surviving mercenary become a were-wolf too, now that he's been scratched by one? Or doesn't it work like that?
Guess I'll just have to come back to find out!! -Posted on May 15, 2008 | | User: DAJB | | 5 | | Heh - great end to the prologue! Looking forward to the main story! -Posted on May 15, 2008 | | User: TheMidge28 | | 5 | sweet.
somethings are little unclear, but that may be intended but definitely a sweet set up for the story. -Posted on May 15, 2008 | | User: Dem | | 5 | So are they "completely" different personalities? They don't know what each other do and don't remember any of what other do? Like two beings in same body and transforming is just "switch" between them?
Anyway. I like this :D ... I hope you keep on doing this for a long time :). I like werewolf stories and good really good one's are hard to find :(. -Posted on May 15, 2008 | | User: JustNoPoint | | 5 | | Haha Very patriotic doggy. This page is excellent! -Posted on May 15, 2008 |
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