| | User: Luminous | | 5 | Maaan, you started putting pages up without telling me. O:
Anyway, I've already mentioned my thoughts on this on MSN... So... useless comment, hooray!
Also, I think I said this, but her overalls are awesome. -Posted on May 13, 2007 | | User: Allan | | 4 | I suggest working on yoru hands a bit. Don't try to overdo them with detail, not all hands in comics have to have fingernails in black lines. Her head's a little funny in that second panel, but in the next one it looks fine, so good one, there.
Anyway, work on those, and I'll try and come up with more things to work on as the pages on go. -Posted on May 09, 2007 | | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here!
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