sorry if you are having trouble reading some of the small fonts >< but some times i have to make it smaller to fit my weird sized text bubbles T_T
i'll try to make them bigger if i can :3
A 'package of hope' that says "danger" on it?? That sure sounds promising... XD
Oh, one thing that I forgot to mention before is that you might wanna make the font for some of the dialogue a little bigger, if you can; sometimes the font is hard to read because it's so small (i.e. pages 23-25). Just a thought. ^^;;
Nice cover, and it's good to have you back on the duck. Good job on having no little irratating shoujo screentones pop up everytime you show a male's face.
Seriously, I appreciate it. Having a female lead who doesn't swoon instantly is a bonus.
nyahaha you will see wat is in the package later :3 and yup its military related XD and they girl will be introduced later on in the story :3 she is accually based on a friend of mine, who is now applying the same job in the military XD
You have such a nice comic! The story just pulls you in and the art is lovely. ^_^ I can't wait to see more.
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I luv your manga so far, you are a great writer. Do i smell a little romance between those two? Haha, lol, well either way it's great! AND CIGGARETTS? now where does that come from
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Again you amaze me a wonderful story and beautiful art. I would like for you to note that you're grammar is a little off. Aside from that, everything is well done. Brava! Brava!
Also, from what I can tell the package, if belonging to the military, is most likely a message, map with coordinates, a plan, etc, about an enemy compound that will most likely go boom. Can't wait for more. Try to stick as close to the story as possible. Most comics trail off from the original point and become something else. Like Michael Jackson and his career. (Yes that was in there just to burn Michael!)
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[Snerks] You know, I would gladly trade her places. Valean doesn't seem like such a bad guy when you take the whole shooting-a-kid thing out of the picture. I can already see the roses budding around his face. Gack! Too much anime...bad. But am curious about this girl with the mysterious package. It's going to "Brownies"! J/K I know better than that, it's secret coordinates it the enemy! [Rolls eyes] I'm trying my best and that's all that I have.
I luv your manga so far, you are a great writer. Do i smell a little romance between those two? Haha, lol, well either way it's great! AND CIGGARETTS? now where does that come from
