| | User: shino | | 5 | | FAVED!!!!!!! -Posted on Feb 07, 2008 | | User: cocbys | | | | Hahaha, you're right -Posted on Nov 20, 2007 | | User: Roken | | | | I'm actually aware of that but I started this before it came out. You're right it is sucky, guess they should hire me no? -Posted on Oct 11, 2007 | | User: cocbys | | 5 | You know that there's already a second "Labyrinth" ? It's called "Return to Labyrinth", and it's published by Tokyopop.
But, eh, the drawings... kinda... suck. Yeah. T___T -Posted on Jul 26, 2007 | | User: Roken | | | | ill be back taking time off for now i shall return..... -Posted on Feb 26, 2007 | | User: Fyrsiel | | | | Dx *reh* How short lived it was... -Posted on Nov 24, 2006 | | User: Darkmax | | 5 | | Very nice -Posted on Oct 29, 2006 | | User: Not Logged In | | |  Lovely drawing! Jareth is so bishonen, even in manga form! -Posted on May 08, 2006 | | User: Nieni Springs | | | | >> I'm going to refrain from prodding you for updates, simply because I haven't inked MY comic pages in over a week. XDDD;; -Posted on Feb 18, 2006 | | User: Randal | | | | that wood on the porch in panel one looks nice =) -Posted on Feb 15, 2006 | | User: daidaishar | | 5 | | ah, so many happy Labyrinth just seeing that someone's made this into a comic makes me happy *faved* -Posted on Feb 10, 2006 | | User: Roken | | | | ~likes picking fights randomly and often just fights self. Never pay any mind~ -Posted on Feb 10, 2006 | | User: SailorPoison | | 5 | | * cheers * page one is awesome! -Posted on Feb 10, 2006 | | User: Not Logged In | | | | it looks good, plz update soon. -Posted on Feb 10, 2006 | | User: coinilius | | | | Perfection is indeed a hard thing to actually achieve, but that's not really the point here... and not wanting perfection hardly makes you an alien :P I was just giving you the reasons why I found the text to be 'yucky looking' and why that wasn't an insult, just an opinion. -Posted on Feb 09, 2006 | | User: Roken | | | | There's an old saying, 'never be perfect'. I don't want perfection, it's the most foolish illusion of all to me. Why should the comic be uniform in shade? Who said so? Why do it another way when this way manages just fine? Perhaps it's just human nature, this exspectation. I don't much care for it personally. I think that makes me an alien sometimes. -Posted on Feb 09, 2006 | | User: coinilius | | | Roke - when I said the balloons/text looked yucky, I wasn't trying to suggest that all text bubbles need to look the same (I actually don't like the way I do text and text bubbles, but am kind of stuck with it at the moment) - what doesn't look appealing about them is the way they don't match the rest of the art/page very well.. they're too black and pixellated looking compared to the softer, smoother pencil lines of the comic :)
Also, the way the text goes right up and touches/just touches the border of the balloons in some places is another issue where they don't look as nice as they could. -Posted on Feb 08, 2006 | | User: Roken | | | Iagojester, guess what...it's in england, japanese style and format, and I write in english with a german company pen. I think it's just fine as is. I was actually thinking in doing it all in Japanese but then barely anyone I know would understand it.
Perspective, meh I lost interest in drawing Sarah. I never really liked her and just focused on making her cute. It's Toby's veiw, not birds eye and you'll actually see why it looks that way soon. The bubbles though....just because I don't do them the way you do or that most do doesn't make them yucky.
I'm not drawing the Wild Gang, (disembowling puppets) However....Ambrocious the fox will be there and a few more old favorites. Just so you know ...Merlin the dog (Sarah's sheep dog) is gone. -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | User: Miruku | | 5 | oooh, yeah, i do hope you bring back the fox! he was my absolute favorite.
Liking it so far! The third panel is particularly nice -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | User: Not Logged In | | | This looks really good, u have promising talent
Quistis -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | User: coinilius | | 5 | | Yes, there's some problems with perspective here, and the text/speech balloons seems a bit... yucky looking... but the characters all look quite nice :) It will be interesting to see how the story develops. -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | User: LimboWoman | | | | I like the fact that Jareth is looking at Sarah in a captioned pokeball. -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | User: Nieni Springs | | 5 | Yup, the cliche Toby-grown-up-Jareth's-still-watching fic plot. But it's soooooo lovely to see it in comic form. ^^
Darn you though, I soooo wanted to do this when I got my other stuff finished. XDDD Now I'd just be the poser. *lol* Ah well, it's more fun to read than to do the work and you draw Jareth way hotter than I ever could. :P Yaaaaa~y! -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | User: zammap | | 5 | | toby looks so cute >. -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | User: Fyrsiel | | 5 | | xxxDDDD Hahahahahaha. *sits, having popcorn* All that frightens me, though, is seeing those really disturbing uh... self-disembowling bird-muppet.... things..... Dx *wonders if the little fox guy will come back. xxxDDD!!* -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | User: Tyrapendragon | | 5 | | I would like to see more. -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | User: Willowanderer | | 5 | | I think everyone has a story like this. Mine had Jarith stuck inthe human world -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | User: Keiko_Tsunagi | | 5 | | he is like so smexy! I lvoe your work! All the guys are sooooo lickable! -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | User: Aurora Moon | | 5 | you know, I once wrote an fanfic about this sort of thing. Toby grew up to be this troublesome goth teenager and Sarah was trying to set him straight, and Toby wishes Sarah away to the labyrith, much to Jareth's delight. lol
I wonder if this is what is gonna happen? By the way I love how you draw Jareth.. *drools* -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | User: LimboWoman | | 5 | | Oh yes. It's all my favorite things wraped up in one! -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | User: SarahN | | 5 | | *drool* Seeing Jareth always makes me giddy. -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | User: Hidders | | 5 | | Awe, Toby grew up so cute. Beware, this might become a cult hit. [Steals webpage right off the computer and hides it under her pillow] No worries, I keep it safe! ^_^ -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | User: iagojester | | 5 | O_O
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WOOOOHOOOOOOOO! I lurve this story like a brudder. .... I dunno what dat is. ANYWAY, this looks pretty exciting. I mean, who doesn't love that movie, right? And I've always wondered what happened next, so this is fair game! Your first panel is great- your characters are very fleshed out, and the only problem I see if your 3/4 birds-eye-view, but hey, who doens't get those wrong? Good luck, yo!
oh... and since this ~is~ written in English about an American story, you might wanna change the formatting back to left to right. ^_~ -Posted on Feb 07, 2006 | | Only registered members may vote. Sign up here!
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