the reason I updated so fast was because i had all these previously made. I'm still working on the artwork trying to capture my feel for it. Afterall it's a fanfic webcomic. I also just typed the dialouge in comments below the two pages that are hard to read. Hope that helps thanks for reading.
I just read the whole comic, you need to start making text bubbles and text in paint or something i can barley read this. Also artwork needs some serious fixing up. Your filler art is good, but in the actual comic stuff is a mess.
