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| PKNESS | | Everyone remembers who that guy is right? -Posted on Jul 20, 2009 |
| | User: PKNESS | | | | oh KevinClifford? -Posted on Aug 01, 2009 | | User: megagregar98 | | | YOU DON'T KNOW WHO KEVIN IS!!!
*faint*......he is like the most know pokemon comic maker -Posted on Aug 01, 2009 | | User: XM0stLyGhOstLyX | | | Wow, what a douche
( I was talking about Kevin) -Posted on Aug 01, 2009 | | User: PKNESS | | | | sorry Brawllucas is mah bro's account Awesomeness and i accidentally wrote on his. my bad. XD -Posted on Aug 01, 2009 | | User: Brawllucas | | | | ok when u get home PM me. -Posted on Aug 01, 2009 | | User: awesomeness | | | You don't know who KEVIN is!?
The flash guy?
Renowned spriter?
Man.
But I'm willing to help.
When I get home... -Posted on Aug 01, 2009 | | User: awesomeness | | | To young to pm people...
I'm 12... -Posted on Aug 01, 2009 | | User: PKNESS | | | | Uh awesomeness thanks for your modesty. And I really don't care what this 'Kevin' dude has to say. OH and justover thanks for your comment. I could use your help and you can be in my comic if you wanna. Just message me. :D -Posted on Aug 01, 2009 | | User: justover6 | | 5 | WTF
lol cool comic PKNESS
the WTF was for the critiques on this comic
Man wtf happen to people making sprite comics for the fun of making your own journey and random jokes and fanfiction then sharing it with other people, not "your sprite comic needs to be professional looking" and if you wanted to help why didn't you just say I can help you out a bit to make your comic look better congrates to the few real helpers
man did the Sprite community lose it's respect -Posted on Aug 01, 2009 | | User: awesomeness | | | I'm trying to help.
Your lucky Kevin didn't come hear, he would've destroyed you.
I wasn't trying to be mean.
Just critisicm.
If you had confidence or not, I don't care, I just want you to be a better spriter, because you have potential.
OK?
I'm still going to read this comic, and every time you make a page I will point out everything wrong with it. K?
I think you have a pretty good plot going.
So I'm going to read it in a hope that you get better. -Posted on Aug 01, 2009 | | User: PKNESS | | | | Ok dude, first of all, that was pretty mean and messed up. I know you people are trying to help me, but by criticizing my work isn't really boosting my confidence now is it? So I'm not gonna go all angry ape on you. I'm doing my best right now and if my comic doesn't satisfy your needs, then don't READ IT. K? -Posted on Aug 01, 2009 | | User: awesomeness | | | Oh, my, god.
This is just...
Ok, I'm not going to be mean.
But it's critique time.
Ok, first things first, I'm going to go around the page noting on what's wrong.
Here we go:
First, that's not a panel, it's too big to be a panel. Secondly, what is that curved line on gold's face? It's ruining it.
I think you did the emote with the thin line under his eye wrong. That's an extremely sucky gold recolour. That girl's hair isn't recoloured properly.
That team rocket guy is recoloured so badly, I can't think of a proper adjective for it.
That's not a speech bubble, it's a box. Make a speech bubble, with tails.
Just incase you make the same mistake, no coloured bubbles. When you add tails, it should be enough. Coloured text and outlines MAXIMUM.
Now, font. Arial, Comic Sans MS, Anime Ace and Manga Temple. ONLY. K?
This isn't a comic, it's two panels. -Posted on Aug 01, 2009 | | User: Brawllucas | | | | DUH!!!!!!!!! -Posted on Jul 30, 2009 | | User: megagregar98 | | | WAIT!WAIT!WAIT!WAIT!WAIT!WAIT!WAIT!WAIT!WAIT!
WAI T!WAIT!WAIT!WAIT!WAIT!WAIT!WAIT!WAIT!WAIT!
You and BRALLLUCAS are AREAL TWIN BROS?! -Posted on Jul 30, 2009 | | User: megagregar98 | | | | Somewere, why you wanna know? -Posted on Jul 30, 2009 | | User: Brawllucas | | | | lol where did you go mega? -Posted on Jul 29, 2009 | | User: megagregar98 | | | | TAMN! I have been gone too long! I mist A LOT! -Posted on Jul 28, 2009 |
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