Hmm, I wonder if L was measuring their height during the entire battle? And, the little split inbetween panel 2 is because I had a huge blank space, so I just filled it with the black and white scratches.. and then it looked akward so I put them there. Althogh, it still looks kinda akward..
Sorry (again), I've been having fever's and headaches and all this other crap that's just been bothering me >.> So.. um... here's a cookie for being patient? I'll update later on today, I just need to finish the last panel
Hm.... I'd say today or tommorow. After that, I'm gonna update Chaos Wars... and then Guncannon will take over Chaos Wars for the next 10-20 pages, and then I'll be able to be fully focused (for the most part), on this, and when that time comes, I'll probably update twice every week.
Don't worry, I'm not dropping it or anything of the sorts. It's just, between this, making a story for this, Chaos Wars and College, times has just slipped away.
This is great. Finally, a sprite tournament that comes out good! But SS is right, make a story. Im positive you can do it. Good job and keep it up, and I saw nothing wrong with panel 3&4
Very good. BUT, panels 3 and 4 are a bit hard to understand.
One of the things I (and all the other members of TASC/Whatever our new name is) I hate is mindless Sprite Tournament comics. The battles and graphics usually suck, and there's no plot at all. Your graphics are good, and the battles good so far, but I want to seem some story. That means, maybe a plot thickening with L behind the scenes, or maybe one of the losing fighters coming back later for revenge.
(Oh, and just to help out, if L's gonna be a main character, this http://www.deathgod.org/main.php?x=info/c_l and this: http://www.drworm.net/lautism.htm should help. Read them through!)
