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  ---------- You cannot call Alex a Mary Sue, because he makes mistakes and can be defeated. Sorry, I've been thinking about some common mistakes that authors do with their comics and trying to avoid them. Like Mary Sues, that are simply too good to be real. In case you notice this is an Alex developing chapter, Alex has many little things that are cute, like grabbing his ear when he finds himself caught off guard outside of a battle. The how and why Alfred has no memory of the true reason they're by the bush will be explained next comic. Many thanks to T_III of  For proofreading Alfred's speech. Go see it, I know you want to ;) -Posted on Feb 09, 2010 |
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