This style does create a better atmosphere, for your story.
Love the tense scenes, deep shadows you've created.
The humor you added, to enhance a sense of sarcasm within the characters dilemma, it's done really well.
I smirks at their comments..
I hope to see what will happen next, it's building up to something..
I can't wait ^___^
Happy Halloween Ender!, take care of yourself & have yourself a Awesome evening. ^*^
