The first page! Yayyy, I've been toying with the idea of making this into a web comic for far too long. And so, I'm finally taking that leap of faith and beginning.
I hope you'll bear with me as I, my style, and my ideas evolve.
Hmmm, it seems already you have an interesting drawing style, and I like how you're already using different angles. Of course, I suppose the only thing I could say in improvement is to create more contrast in your lines, but maybe that's the whole concept behind a webcomic called "Gray?" Anyway, good luck, and I'll be pulling for you. .w.